Again constructive criticism welcome. Thanks!
“My name is Róża. Róża Kowalczyk. Fort Marshank was a horrible place for many beasts but for me it was a place of refuge. I had fled my native home in the Far North as it was taken over by a feared group called the Blutrubin. Recently, I discovered my accounts of that time among my (too) many papers. My best friend told me I should make it a story so I have. Beasts need to know that Marshank wasn’t as bad as it seemed.”
March 22: Dear Diary, It has been almost a month since I was forced out of the Far North. All my friends...my family....all of them are dead. They came in the night, our murderers.... I was woken up by my mother telling me to run......There was no warning; there had been no prior…Read more >
I’ve already posted this on the Redwall fandom but I’m having trouble getting constrictive criticism and feedback on it because I really want to improve this story. Just please don’t be rude. Thanks
Prologue: An icy wind blew between the crumbled ruins of Terramort and ruffled the silvery blonde headfur of a grey vixen standing on the remains of an old tower. She stared over the heaving gray waters towards the direction of the Mossflower shore, hatred burning in her eyes. “I’ll make this place feared by woodlanders again” she growled. “And when it is, Redwall and Salamandastron will fall.” A crack of thunder accompanied her words and rain began to fall like a silver pelt over the island. “Mark my words woodlanders. Your precious stronghold…
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Idk if anyone will even read this, but I just wanted to share some writing I have done lately. Yeah, that was the Lamest Blog Post Title Ever, but it works for now. >.< It's another untitled original story idea. I haven't got much, just a few bits and peices from different povs which I wrote to stop them rattling around in my already-muddled-enough brain. =P There are six main povs, which are Ragna, Runfastr, Dusty, Starsky, Ocean, and Flayre. That's a lot I know, but I'm really having fun weaving six characters' tales into one big tapestry. Like good ole Brian Jacques. XD So here are the little bits I've got so far. Enjoy! =) I'll add some of my concept art too. ^^
Clang! The barred gate slid up, and Ragna walked out onto the sand-covered …
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Oh Thor, I'm finally doing this... I know, I said I would be ashamed to show my old pictures, but these are my first two... for some reason, these two actually were not too bad, I still like them, but after that, I just got lazier, I guess, and my drawings got sloppier and sloppier, until I finally realized how awful they were. Then seeing all the amazing fanart on the wiki (I'm looking at you, Sayna XD.. and Reep and everyone.. ;)) made me decide to work harder on it and improve my art, and yup. Waayy better now. ;D
You have my permission to laugh your head off. XD
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So there you have it. My first RW fanart. x]
Alright, so of course I've been working a lot on my original sotry stuff, so I thought if you wanted to learn more about it before I wrote the story (be more involved or just curious, ect) then you're welcome to read it, comment, or make suggestions. I always like to include other people because then it feels "bigger than myself," and because I haven't exactly mastered making dimensional characters (my term for characters who are life-like, is that a real term? I'm not so sure) I don't like getting lonely and unmotivated. (Plus from my perspective as a reader of others' stories I just love knowing more about how they came up with everything, what ideas they have, ect.)
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Alright, so you probably already know that I want to do a rewrite of The Rogue Crew. I really love this book, but there are some things that I don't really like, and I'm sure you know what I mean. ;P I already have a few ideas and some concept art, but I'm still trying to work this out. If you have any suggestions, or things you would like to see happen in this fanfic, please let me know in the comments! :) I'm also trying to figure out a title. I'll brainstorm tonight, and if I come up with anything I'll make a poll for it. But meanwhile, if you have an idea for one, please tell me. ;) I know it will be a loong time until I actually write this, but I'm always planning way ahead anyway. ;P I'm hoping I'll do it after I finish Hero's Destiny…Read more >
So. I have made a big decision, one I've thought about for a while .. Destiny is going Steampunk.
Is this rash? Well I've pondered for four months, so I think no. Is it wise? Probably not, but did that ever stop me? ;P The thing is, I like the Destiny plot, but I could never get into the world. It felt dull. Uncreative. Boring. It needed something more and I think I figured it out. It was too pretty for the dark and foreboding story I'm writing (did I say dark? Well it is, it's at least as dark as TotO if not more so) And as I make it Steampunk, I like it more and more.
So here's were I'm going to keep track of my ideas. If you guys have input/advice/thoughts/or whatever, you are always welcome to tell me :)
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Here is a poem that I wrote last night. Now I'm not usually much of a poet, but for some reason this one just randomly popped into my head. And it's actually a serious one, (or serious-ish) cause usually I can only write silly and ridiculous ones that make no sense whatsoever. :P I might use it in one of my stories, but idk. It's kind of a metaphorical thing, and, well, you'll see. XP
One fine day two mice were walkin',
One called Bill and the other Rocken,
They were both looking for a new abode,
When they came to a fork in the road.
One sign said: This path is hard,
But at the end is a great reward.
The other stated: This way
Is easier, but ends in dismay.
The first path was thorny and overgrown,
The second was pretty and wellworn.
"Which way will we …
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Salmonberry Pond is based off of the pond we have on our 20 acres. It is actually more like a lake for the characters, because in this world, the animals are not human-sized, they're the same size as in our world. But anyway, it is a place where the animals can live together in peace, and usually do, unless some bad guys attack them. Those who have tried have not lived to tell the tale. ;)
Hopefully I will get some pictures on here sometime. ;P
Also, there is now this wiki, where I am writing all about Salmonberry Pond. :)
There are 7 main tribes of Salmonberry Pond:
The Mice live in caves in Spring Bay. They are normally pretty peaceful, unless their home is in danger, then the bad guys are the ones in danger.
The Shrews live in Shrew cave, …
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Hello to everyone reading this! And thanks for reading, I appreciate it :D
Okay, so I'm honestly a little dissapointed in my FanFictions, but because they are my first, I take it as a practice thing. And practice is good! But, now I'd like to do a better job planning, and so, I would like to create an original story!
It'll be sort of similar to Redwall/Mistmantle, in that the characters are animals, but with an entirely different world and plot of course. The clothing style will be slightly undefined, almost a cross between today's and olders times. I'm afraid electronics and technology is lacking in this world, but it's logical, seeing as they don't quite at the resources for all of that there. And of course it's fiction!
I'll have some dram…Read more >
Well, we all need to laugh sometimes. So I'll let you have a nice laugh here ... at my expense, yes. Please look here  for the good stuff ...Read more >
- I've been thinking about doing something like this for awhile, but didn't, till now at least.
- Now that the detailed explanation is over, let's get right to them, shall we? :D
- To the left we have the first design of Reep. See what I mean when I say that he looks like Sayna's Gustav? And Sayna hadn't even drawn him yet. I think I'll keep his ThunderStorm (if I get to it) design close to this.
- Right here we have the first Nikko. This was the one, if any of you remember me mentioning it, that was earless and tailless. I think now that he probably has ears under the hood, but alas absolutely no tail :'( Poor guy. And to think his big tail is one of his defining features now.
- The last one (at least for now. I did have one or two others, but their pa…
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At last I've found the time to begin this! So here we go :D (The sign-up link can be found here .)
The timeline link can be found here
This is a collaboration project between the following users (If you wish to quit participating in the project, or would like to join, please notify me. If you decide to quit, your writing will not be deleted unless otherwise specified.) Now, going in order of who comented first to most recently;
To begin, I will write the Prologue, then whoever wishes to continue the story can submit their paragraphs/chapter/ect to my message wall. Unfortunately I'll have to add it here, because of course, this is a blog post. (As soon as I can anyway, once we finish a timeline. DX)
Next order on our list; …
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Hello Everyone reading!
Recently, I've been thinking about a lot of different ideas. And the question is, would anyone like to participate in a large collaboration project? In other words, this will be a Redwall FanFiction between anyone who wants to join, similar to the Pass-A-Long story but a bit different.
So, I have this FanFiction idea, and whoever wants to write it with me can sign up! (There's no limit to people. It's sort of a cross between FanFiction and Roleplaying.) If it's alright, I'll claim the role as leader of the project (Not to be rude of anything... I just think there should be someone in charge so that conflict can be resolved. I would sugest someone else, but I suppose it is my crazy idea XD)
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Forgive the caps .. *cough* thank you. :)
BUT IT IS FAIR TIME XD YAY!
I'm excited! *understatement* Project check in was tonight and I won't know what ribbons I got until tomorrow noon *bounces* I also went to the 4H rodeo, which is cool, and I got to see my favorite sport ever, barrel racing! One day I will barrel race! When I get my gray Arabian dream horse and name her Ghost Dancer! :D Yea .. yea .. I know. Big dreams *sigh*
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Iversons(erm *cough* that is the Lukes) (Cause Morning Glory has never won anything but participation ribbons on woodcut before) My friend and the club's vice president got crowned M…
I think that it is because of three reasons,
1. Being the villain.
Riggu Felis was so crazy sometimes that it was scary. Going to great lengths to kill every bird on Green Isle just because one made him lose half of his face, yelling and screaming at every beast under his command, and even scorning his own sons for not being able to kill a dangerous bird.
2. Being the alliances.
I loved how the coolest otter holts, Galedeep, Wavedog, and Shellhound joined together. Now all their missing is hares joining otters in battle. * sees The Rogue Crew * Oh. Yeah.
3. Being the ending.
I have to say it. I felt satisfied how Riggu Felis died. I was nervous when Leatho was stuck in the burning building. I was sad when Pandion died. I thought it was cool and …Read more >
Well, this is going to be a story about wolves. I haven't really written it yet (at all), but I wanted to display this picture:
I've decided to turn this into a comic! Yay! Now, let's see if I can actually get this started ...Read more >
I probably should have told you all this before now :P but my schedule is . . . to say the least, rather unstable. I'm dreadfully sorry if I left chat extrememly suddenly, and that is probably because another of my family lay claims to the computer or someone called me. Part of the time that's my fault, not realizing it was their turn or something, but anyways: I may leave chat suddenly without saying goodbye. DX Sorry Sayna, Stan and everyone else who fell victim to one of my sudden disappearances. It's not because I don't want to talk to you (quite the contrary) so yeah. XD --Shadowed... and Shadowing. 09:22, April 20, 2015 (UTC)Read more >
I'm just going to use this blog post for when I save/plan/mess around with my signatures, since I'm kind of new to all the coding stuff. If you have any tips for making/changing/special effecting them, I'd be delighted to know! And if I shouldn't put this here, then I can remove it . . . Although I've never deleted a blog post before. :P (P. S. spoiler alerts to future signatures! XD)
Vaylayna the Mercenary Even to make a shadow, you need light.
Vaylayna the Mercenary Shadows fall, yet they leave no mark.
Vaylayna the Shade Shadows fall and shadows rise... and the Mercenaries go with them.
Vaylayna the Mercenary Shadows fall, yet they leave no mark
Vaylayna and Rosebrush Shadows fall, and shadows rise... And the Mercenaries go with them.
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Hi it's me. I haven't disappeared off the face of wiki XP
I just wanted to say, that I'm sorry for not being very active recently. I'm a 4Her, and I was extremely busy during fair season, which, (thank goodness) has finally ended. While I will be back in school soon, I should have more free time then I have had, and I should become a lot more active.
So yea, I'm sorry I disappeared for so long. And I'm back! I just thought everyone should know what happened.
I'll be around! :D
Yay my sig is finally working XD
What is a storm without wind? Void of power. What is wind without a storm? Void of awe. 16:11, August 20, 2014 (UTC)Read more >
I was wondering if I should make an RPG on this wiki. Tell my what you think!Read more >
SOOO much better at drawing in real lifeRead more >
do u guys think i should make more line arts, if so, what kinds of animals.Read more >
line art again, this is a male wildcat.Read more >
well i was bored so i made this mouse line art if someone wanted to make a mouse, well if u want to, dont ask just take him... if u done know how u should be able to left click and click copy, then pull up ur paint or what ever u program u use.Read more >
WELL.. my new pic i made with photoshop was too big :p so it took off the b on batty and nao its says atty o-o
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age: 27 seasons
height: 8' 4"
weight: (with armor) 640 lbs.; (without armor); 527 lbs.
for color: dark grey
eye color: yellow
notable features: has a long scar going across his face that starts at his left ear and ends at his chin.
weapons: uses a battle-ax, braodsword, war-hammer, twin war axes, and a trident
armor: similar to that of a gladiator, with armor on his left arm and shins and both arms have pauldrons. also has a chest plate and chain mail hauberk, a helmet similar to that of a Thracian gladiator and a shield a Greek spartan would use
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I'm Tired my friends, I'm tired of seeing my friends fight, I'm tired of the heart ache from the drama. Mostly I'm tired of seeing my friends being ugly to each other. I'm tired of all the pain I feel and hear on the Wiki Chat everyday. There's too much of it. It's like pieces of glass in my head all the time. Can you understand? I want everyone to be nicer to each other again, like we use to back in the good old days, I want to see ALL my friends being nicer to each other, treating each other with love, kindness and respect, is way better than treating each other ugly and horrible.
I want us to be a happy Wikia Family again, like we's once were, I love my Wikia family and friends, and I want to see them happy again, I love you all and I ap…Read more >
Sorry mates. I'll be offline for a while ; I have a screaming migraine and I'm nauseous. If I'm not on tomorrow, I'll try to be on in a couple of days. I've got a 10-alarm migraine. I read that most migraines last about four hours although severe ones can last up to a week. I don't know which ones mine are.
I'm going to go to bed and try to sleep it off if I can.
--Tiria Wildlough Ee aye eeeh!! 15:45, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
--Tiria Wildlough Ee aye eeeh!! 06:20, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
--Tiria Wildlough Ee aye eeeh!! 03:23, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
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eye color: emerald green
fur color/pattern: tan with one silver stripe starting at forehead and ending at the base of the back and white on the chest and abdomen
height: 6' 5"
weight: 226 lbs.
age: 18 seasons in appearance (unknown reasons for un-aging)
tools/weapons: doesn't use tools really, but used to use a spear, shortsword, longsword, and armor that, outside of Redwall series, looked like Roman gladiator armor
known aliases: Josi
background/personality: Josi had a very dark and unforgiving past. He was born to a a couple that were both mercenaries in a western kingdom. he was trained to fight the moment he learned to walk, and began to see the darkness and horrors of war at a very young age. He was 9 seasons old wh…Read more >
Valentine’s Day is full of paper hearts,
but my heart for you, my friends,
is full of feelings
more precious to me than gold,
as long lasting as diamonds.
My heart for you, my friends
is filled with emotions strong as platinum,
and appreciation for you
worth more to me than any treasure.
My Valentine heart is yours,
my priceless friends.
Happy Valentine’s Day!--Tiria Wildlough Ee aye eeeh!! 15:39, February 14, 2013 (UTC)Read more >
Tensions have been getting somewhat high recently, and I've been worried. Arguments are becoming close calls more often, people have gotten depressed frequently, and I have been trying as hard as possible not to lost any of the wonderful friends I've made here. For all I know, I might have already failed at that already. Therefore, I've decided that I'm going to lay off Wiki for a little, probably around a week. Maybe I'll find another Wiki to just pass the time on (NOT to replace this one), then slowly disappear from it when I get back here. I would tell you which one, but I don't want anyone following me there and bringing the tensions with them. Please, nobody take this as me ditching Holt Rhulain; I wouldn't ever do that, just I might…Read more >
Remaking an old RPG a friend from long time ago made, some of you might of remembered this old RPG, and some of you might not remember, this RPG was made to honor the person who first created the RPG, as some of us will remember as Jadefang.
But, if you must know what this RPG really is about, then I'll explain.
We fight against each other. Or go on a grand adventure somewhere. Whatever's the rage in RPG's.
What are our characters?
No profile needed! If your avatar is a dragon, then your character is a dragon. If you avatar is a man, then your character is a man. If your avatar is a book, then... your character is a book.
Etc. etc. etc.
You get the idea.
1. Have tons of fun.
2. You can only have one character at a time- but…
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"In the beginning the Universe was created. This made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move."
- Douglas Adams
Sometimes I wonder how the human race got to the standards it is at now. I mean, isn't it amazing how quickly we have branched out in our thoughts, and have managed to do so much? Well honestly I think this would have happened no matter what LOL =P
Anyway, have you ever wanted to see how a tiny clutter of primitive people could grow into a giant nation? Have you ever wanted to TRY IT YOURSELF? Well, then this is the RPG for you! Introducing...The Rise of Civilization!
1. This is different from most RPGs. In fact I'm not even sure it can be called that more so than an SSG (Simple Strategy Game). You make …
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The year is 1720 A.H. and there is now a golden age of piracy sweeping through the uncertain waters of the Western Sea and beyond; as former warlords and ladies and ex-naval creatures alike are eagerly considering the prospect of taking to the sea and hoisting the Jolly Roger (and all manner of similar flags). Meanwhile, the vermin governors on various settled islands in the Western sea do nothing except drink tea and gorge themselves idly and watch as fools of all manner get themselves killed over ‘a few gold trinkets’ Forty miles south of Sampetra, there is a small uncharted island called Vulpuz’s Cay, so-named for its oddly foxlike mountain.
Vulpuz’s Cay is uncharted and known only to the islanders who reside there. If you’ve been shipwr…
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The Story of Fírinne Searc
By Justin McNabb
"Fírinne, do not forget the wood!" my mother calls as I head out to the woods. Our house on the southern shore of the Land of Ice and Snow is a peaceful place, despite the fact it is on an island noted for its many evil inhabitants. My family, though, is not evil at all. Me, my brother, mother, uncle, and father, all have lived here for at least 27 seasons, my older brother, Farwin, is six seasons older than me, I am nineteen. For a long while now he has been acting... strange. My Father, Rayden, is the best father one could ask for, same with my mother, May. Oh, and Uncle Josiah! He is very comical and jolly. He taught me to play the pan flute. I love to listen to their stories by the fire, but F…
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Hello everyone, I have to be out of state for Christmas in a place that does not allow me to get on chat. Consequently, I will be gone all of today and tomorrow and probably Wendsday as well. I'm really sorry for the inconvenience :( I will see you all when I get back and I hope you all have a wonderful Christmas
Secondarily, it is quite possible that a friend of mine will be joining Holt Rhulain, so if they do come on whilst I am away, please be as welcoming as possible. Again, merry Christmas :)Read more >
Mates, thank you for your friendship. I just want to say Merry Christmas. May God bless you all, thanks for your friendship towards me, a wretched sinner saved by God's Grace 9 years ago! I know the syria violence took a toll on me, but now, its over and we can mourn, but prais egod its ended! Please pray that as I enter my 2nd year on wikia and my 16th year of life, my friendships will stay intact and I can be a more active mate and grow in my faith. Your friend and brother in christ,Wedgeback (talk)WedgeRead more >
I just wanted to leave a quick notice that, due to an unfortunate lack of both time and inspiration, I will be abandoning my fanfiction titled "Ice Queen." If anybody would like to adopt or otherwise use this story for their own purposes, feel free to leave a comment on this blog relating to the matter. Seeing as how the story has a rather non-orthodox setting, feel free to also ask me any questions pertaining to any and all matters within the story that might pose an issue (I.e, if you don't understand something about a particular character, setting, etc).
The story is located on Redwall wiki, and will remain there unless and until someone decides to adopt it. I sincerely hope it can be continued, though by means other than my own.Read more >
I just want to thank every single one of you for being my friend, you are all my friends and I am so happy to know every single one of you, I know this year hasn't been good, and completely rocky since March, but hey we survived through all that mess, I would make a list of those I want to thank and Bless for their friendship, but I won't make that list, anyway I just want to say thank you to all of you and God Bless all of My friends, It has been a great honor knowing all of you and I wish to meet you all someday, give some of you a hand shake, and some of you a hug, whichever will be suitable to you. and since I have been on the Wiki for 2 years and going to my second Christmas on Wikia, I just want to say thank you all once more, and I …Read more >
Well, due to the unfavorable outcome of the recent presidential election, I have been told of several seriously huge changes in my life. Long story short, my parents were absolutely beside themselves when Obama was re-elected, and made the decision to move out of the country. However, due to complications, my dad will have to remain as a marine here on US soil for a few more years. My Mom and I will be leaving for Scotland where her parents (my grandparents) left their estate for our use. So within forty eight hours, I will be flying out to Glasgow, most likely to stay :(
I really love Scotland, even though I've only been there once, but I'm still really scared :( I JUST got settled here in DC with school and all, and now I'm moving not a m…Read more >
-This is where everyone else went.
I suppose that this is the larva (probably incorrect but oh well) stage, and RWW was the Chrysalis stage. Perhaps you'll see more of me here, perhaps not, we shall see, we shall see.Read more >
Hello all! So...It has been exactly 1 year since i joined the wiki network and i'm glad to have met all of you!
October 13th 2011 Joined the redwall wiki and met salem and niko
October 28th I founded http:/shipsandthings.wikia.com currently I have 308 articles and 1,100+ edits
December 15th founded http://avalonsbeauties.wikia.com
December 25th 2012 1st Christmas on wikia
Febuary 1st 2012 RIP Brian Jaques
April 24th Founded http://barbarians.wikia.com
April 28th Gave mewt adminship to shipsandthings, worried now i made the wrong choice
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Hey guys, I'm in need of some feedback, ideas and input on this story I'm trying to do please. Any could help and I'd be very thankful for it!
One problem: I've noticed I've got a lot of things out of character in the canon characters and don't know how to fix it.Read more >
Holt Rhulain chat is experiencing technical difficulties with chat as of September 19, please meet on the chat for http://thequeanandtherhulain.wikia.com, this chat works.--Tiria Wildlough Ee aye eeeh!! 17:08, September 19, 2012 (UTC)Read more >
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This is my 2nd fanfiction
Tiria Wildlough high queen of green isle, having vanquished Fellis the cat and his vermin lounged in the chair of state, her crown on her head. 2 otter sentries stood guard at the gates with spears at the ready. Yet they were being watched by cruel eyes. Meanwhile....the two sentries were dismissed leaving the rhulian unguarded. Wildlogh slouched out and fell into a deep sleep. The two ermine crept in through the open window with scimtars drawn. "Gag her, " said the 1st, a young one named Luiz. "Aye" the 2nd one gagged the otter and threw her in a sack. The two ermine then slipped quietly out the window, but 2 guards followed them. Luiz saw them instantly. He turned on them blazing in bloodwrath and killed the 1st …
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In the past few months, I've seen a great decline in RWW activity. The wiki is fighting a losing battle and is clinging to its life. Now I know I failed to take proper action against Mewtworules until later than I should have, but it looks like my years of hard work has crumbled down around me. I've seen to it that this nuisance has been permanently banned from Redwall Wars Wiki. Please don't abandon the wiki that brought many of you together in its darkest hour.Read more >
This is a fction story about ssyria i made up, Wedgeback 14:32, July 23, 2012 (UTC)Wildlough will be helping me out
The day dawned fiery in Damascus.Read more >